Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Chapter 1


Cover:
Well I'm lazy and have other stuff to do, but here's the badly done cover of this chapter.











Page 4 and Preview:


Anyway, this is pg 4. Be warned that earlier pages have horrible art as they were done one year ago (yes I procrastinated that long, shoot me) . The other pages of the chapter are being edited and toned right now. Also, I have no idea how to tone, so it looks horrible.

If anyone have any critics, (because as you can see, I really need them) give me a note. I have a deviantart too, starlacyi.deviantart.com

Well, hope you at least enjoy the story a little. (Yes the story's bad too, lol)

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

It's kind of hard to understand your story. Maybe you should explain it a bit.